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November 15, 2011


Robyn Hood Black

Great tips! I especially like the observation that "suddenly" is an attempt to build tension that the writer hasn't earned - nice way to put it.

Barbara Jean

Great tip, Bruce. I always do a search in Word for "just" and "only" when I've finished a manuscript. "Suddenly" I've managed to stay away from!

Elizabeth Dulemba

That IS good advice! Thank you! :) e

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